What, if anything, is wrong with the following paraphrase?
Original passage (cited in APA style) from:
Bavelier, D., Green, C. S., Han, D. H., Renshaw, P. F., Merzenich, M. M., & Gentile, D. A.
(2011). Brains on video games. Nature Reviews Neuroscience, 12(12), 763-768.
doi:10.1038/nrn3135
"It is worth noting that the term ‘video games’ is far from a single construct and thus, has almost no scientific predictive power. One can no more say what the effects of video games are, than one can say what the effects of food are."
Paraphrase:
It is hard to judge the effect of video games on people because there are so many different kinds of games. Judging their impact is as hard as saying what the effects of food are (Bavelier et al., 2011, p. 763).